【雅思段落选标题真题】银川雅思候选人雅思写作10次失败总结

看这个题目好像膝盖中了一枪。

这篇文章概括了几个常见的错误.

看，不要背这些。

坑已经告诉你了，再往里跳是你的错。

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常见失败案例：

topic 1-should college students be allowed to get married？

this topic is very interesting . I ' m very interested in talking about this topic . be cause I ' m also a college student and I ' m not

节目修改：开门见山地直奔主题

N my opinion，it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

Topic 2-will modern technology、such as the internet、ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information？(雅思真题)

Ok，this topic is a very good topic . first，let me tell you a story : I have a friend，He likes go on the internet very much . everst He uses

topic 3-the importance of environmental protection

哦，this topic is surely very important . isn ' t it？Of course！It's reallyvery very important！

《见馆舍》开头第二名：中国式英语人看得人晕头转向(分血指数：)

典型失败案例：topic 1-the happiest moment in your life

In our life，there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily.

Topic 2- The population problem

the population problem is a very big problem . for example，in the city centers of Shanghai，wecan always see people mountain people sea to

topic 3-is there fairness in today ' s business world？

I think in today's society，there is no fairness in the business world . for example，I always chopped when I go out buy things.

topic 4-the advantage of being a nice person

being a nice person have many advantage . I believe if a people always dobad things，he will get "baoying " .

《冠词》开头第三名：观点模糊的态度(分血指数：)

典型失败案例：topic-should college students be allowed to get married？

I think this topic is very hard to say . because I am still very little，only 17，and not married，so this topic is very difficult for me。

以“冠词”开头的第四名：主题无轨电车(分血指数：)

常见故障案例：topic-it is said that now adays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through unive

rsity education. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To havethese important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, ourfriends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

“见官死”开头之五：语法错误惨不忍睹 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punishparents too besides children is also should.

“见官死”开头之六：过分简单没有重点 (喷血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

“见官死”开头之七：用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because theyare very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

“见官死”开头之八：意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. Andit is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimesharmful to our society.

“见官死”开头之九：中国俗语胡乱翻译 (喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe asentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/herfamily?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can make hole……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese peoplealways say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

“见官死”开头之十： 观点武断 态度强硬 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All thesuccessful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people whodon’t have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2 – The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obeythe traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’msure there will be no traffic problem any more.

受用不？这么多英语看蒙圈了？