【英语文章段落总结】华辉考博英语段落分析与发展

华辉考博英语段落分析与发展

now that our relationship to the earth has changed so utterly，We have to see that change and understand its implications . our challenge is to recorlengethey are symp toms of an underlying problem broader ii Cope and more serious than any we have ever faced . global warming，ozone depletion，the.two aspects to this challenge . the first is to realize that our power to harm the earth can in-deed have global and even permanent effects.is to realize that the only way to understand our new role as a co-architect of nature is to see ourselves as part of a complex system that does not op EPthe problem is not our effect on the environment so much as our relationss Ip with the environment。As a result，Any solution to the problem will require a careful assessment of that relationship as well as the complex inter relationship among famong(摘自《Ships in the Desert by Al Gore》)

华惠科博英语段落分析与扩展

1 .-they all have a common cause :there are actually two aspects to this challenge.the first is to realize that.t.as a result，any solution to the problem will require.

[参考翻译].他们都有共同的理由：这个挑战实际上有两个方面。首先要认识到.第二，要认识到.因此，解决这个问题的任何方法都是必要的。

写作思维：这四篇文章可以应用于问题分析型和问题解决型写作。先提问，然后分析问题或原因，最后提出建议。根据具体内容，可以替换某些表示法。

以下是以“个人信息泄露”为例伪造的。

电信框架、junk messages、harassing phone calls、And fake cards-they all have a common cause 3360 privacy di are actually three aspects

some technicians and employees who have access to private information sell other people's privacy for personal gain. The third is to emphasizethat we lack effectivelegalsystems and constraints for protecting personal privacy. As a result, the solution to the problem will require jointefforts fromcitizens,society,related industries,and national policies.

华慧考博英语段落分析与拓展

2.The problem is not our effect on the environment so much as our relationship with the environment. 问题不在于我们对环境的影响，而在于我们与环境的关系。

短语提炼：not…so much A as B…“与其说……不如说……”
effect on… 对……的作用/影响

【例】One’s greatness lies not so much in his wealth as in his character.
一个人的伟大尤其说是他的财富来判断，还不如说是由他的品德来判断。

【例】he crisis had a negative effect on trade.
这次危机对贸易产生了很坏的影响。

3.Our challenge is to recognize that the startling images of environmental destruction now occurring all over the world have much more in common than their ability to shock and awaken us.
【结构分析】
Our challenge is to recognize【that the startling images of environmental destruction now
that引导宾语从句
occurring all over the world have much more in common than their ability to shock and awaken us.】
【深入剖析】主干是：our challenge is to recognize；that引导宾语从句，充当recognize的宾语；occurring是现在分词作后置定语，修饰environmental destruction；than引导比较结构；to shock and awaken us是不定式作后置定语，修饰ability。

华慧考博英语段落分析与拓展

【参考译文】我们面临的挑战是要认识到，目前在世界各地发生的环境破坏的令人震惊的画面，除了能够震惊和唤醒我们之外，它们还有更多的共同之处。

【重点词汇】
startlingadj.令人吃惊的，不寻常的
destructionn.破坏，摧毁
have much more in common 有更多的共同点

4.As a result, any solution to the problem will require a careful assessment of that relationship as well as the complex interrelationship among factors within civilization and between them and the major natural components of the earth's ecological system.
【结构分析】

华慧考博英语段落分析与拓展

【深入剖析】此句是一个简单句，主干为： any solution will require a careful assessment；本句的介词短语丰富：to the problem是介宾短语， 作定语修饰solution；of+…是介宾短语作定语，修饰assessment；as well as和 第二个and连接三个并列的名词性结构：thatrelationship、the complex interrelationship和the major natural components，也是of引导的介宾短语的主要内容；that relationship指的是人类与环境的关系；among factors作介宾短语，修饰interrelationship；within civilization and between them是介词短语，修饰factors；of the earth’s ecological system修饰components。

【参考译文】因此，要解决问题就要认真评估人类与环境的关系，文明之间和内部各种因素的复杂关系以及地球生态系统的主要自然成分。

【重点词汇】
assessmentn. 评估、评价
interrelationshipn. 相互关系
civilizationn. 文明、文化
componentn.成分、组件
ecological system 生态系统