案例研究:

the diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate。流程图需要的三个字:整个过程;阶段阶段:Step阶段)

Chocolate comes from the cacao tree,which is grown in parts of south America,Africa and Indonesia

[流程图的特征之一:介绍过程必须使用一般的现在]

[流程图的特点2:大量使用定语从句,相关的两个句子就会连接起来。【成语】

[流程图特征3:多用被动语态]the tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans。

流程图特征4:使用连接词表示顺序“when the pods are ripe,they are harvested,the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in larrare”

During the fermenting process,the beans turn brown。

[流程图特征5:个别图片没有说明,但必须适当地添加图片中可以直接读取的内容。否则,字数可能无法满足。但是一定要掌握尺度,千万不要加上自己的主观观点,否则会扣分。]

Next,The brown beans are spread in The sun to dry . they are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry . after this,The beans are taken

After being roasted,The beans are crushed and The outer shell is removed . this part is not needed for making chocolate . finally,The inner part

[流程图特征6:通常不需要编写摘要]

the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive steps . first the L

then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas,Which fall through the metal grid

those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours,Several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time . the drieesfirst they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 ~ 1300this process is followed by cook Ni shed bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chaoling

once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard,they get packaged and delivered to their final destination,be it a building site or store

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由此可以看出,IELTS随笔流程图中有很多需要特别注意的地方,但同时,如果烤鸭们给予这种特别注意,可能会成为高分经典文章的一篇。

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